La Misteriosa

He's late.  Again. 

Annoyed, she leans forward on her tiptoes.  No man has ever dared to keep her waiting.  No man until him.

She searches for him amongst the hordes of adorers at her feet.  She sees Tomás, who pledged to bring her a finch for every kiss she bestowed on him.  True to his word, he has one in a cage, at the ready.  She wrinkles her nose.  After two she decided they were too messy—the birds and his kisses.

There's Ramón with his notebook and pen, scribbling.  As always.  She would give him a fond smile if she weren't so peeved.  Ramón and his sweet imagination, writing poetry to her beauty.  A man of words, but not so much of action.  And she definitely likes action.

Ah—dark, brooding Carlos, partially hidden in a corner, separate from the rest.  He watches her with that gaze that used to make her shiver in anticipation.  But that was all he did: watch, smoldering in her general direction.

In the center, there's José Christian, with his paintbrush and steady hand.  She can tell that he paints another fileteado sign dedicated to her, like the one she stands over.  She remembers one time when he used her body as the canvas.  He still claims that was his masterpiece.

But of him for whom she waits?  No sign.

She exhales, expelling her irritation.  How many times has he kept her waiting?  Three?  Eleven?  Twenty-seven?  Once is too many.  What will he bring this time to make up for his inattention?  A trinket?  A shiny bauble to dangle from her neck?  She has plenty of things.  What she wants is intangible and much more precious.  Is he the one to give it to her? 

She has doubts.

But still she waits, because the doubts are entwined with hope.  And for hope, she can be patient—at least for a few moments longer.

Posted by Kate on 26 January 2010

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  • I hope she's waiting for someone who exists.

    Posted by Parisa, 26/01/2010 4:33am (7 months ago)

  • lol, I was going to say exactly what Parisa said

    Posted by Jen, 26/01/2010 5:04am (7 months ago)

  • You guys are so cynical. In case you haven't noted it, romance exists here. On this website, we choose to believe.

    Posted by Kate, 26/01/2010 5:23am (7 months ago)

  • There's no doubt there's romance involved. I just hoped it was with someone she actually knew. :) You know as opposed to.. She's waiting for the one. He's out there somewhere...
    Does Lila read your blog?

    Posted by Parisa, 26/01/2010 10:28am (7 months ago)

  • But either way he exists.

    I'm not sure Lila reads my blog, but I emailed her that she should check it out this week. ;)

    Posted by Kate, 26/01/2010 11:11am (7 months ago)

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